Maxi Felix

[maximillion]

-General-

Full Name: Maxi Felix
Gender: male
Age, Birthplace & Date: 11, London, October 30th 2037
Bloodline: halfblood, (mom=witch, dad=muggle)

-Appearance-

Hair: shoulder length, strawberry blonde

Eyes: green

Body Type: tall, thin,wiry

Unique Features: red plastic frame glasses, star shaped burn on his left hand

More Detailed Physical Description :(At least fifty words. Also, if you can, please include a picture of the character's play-by.)

Maxi felix is five feet tall, with shoulder length hair that is strawberry blonde, his eyes are green and he wears red plasic frame glasses, his muscular build is thin and wiry with very little body fat, and he has a star shaped burn on his left hand from the time his friend was playing around with incendio.

-Personality-

Boggart: large viscious dog

Mirror of Erised: happy time with his pet cat

Patronus: lynx

Temperament/Allegiance: Maxi is nice and helpful to his friends

Likes/Dislikes: likes-cats, books, bertie beans, pumpkin pasties, chocolate frogs Dislikes-dogs, history, homework, spicy foods

Strong Points/Weaknesses: Strong points-evasiveness, speed, inteligent Weaknesses- low muscle strength, studying

Whims/Habits: playing with his pet cat, reading, watching dad's tv

Detailed Personality :Maxi has a strong love of cats but is very fearful of dogs, he has one good friend and a few aquaintances, he's not very outgoing, he enjoys a good book, likes to run track, and muggle mythology


Character's Family :

Maxi's mom is a witch named Alice who married a muggle man named Tom, he has a pet cat named Chester which he loves and a baby sister named Lexi

-Training-
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Current Year of Studies: first year at Hogwarts

House: Ravenclaw, Slytherin, Gryffindor, Hufflepuff

-Character History-

Maxi was born in the year 2037 eleven years ago, when he was three he got a pet cat, when he was seven his dad got a tv which Maxi enjoyed watching, when he was nine his sister Lexi was born, when he was ten his friend was showing him Incendio but accidentally burned Maxi's left hand leaving a star shaped burn scar, when he was eleven he got the Hogwarts letter and his parents took him shopping at Diagon Alley for school supplies, his wand was Oak with unicorn hair core.


[The "Real you"

Alias : Maxi
Disposable time : 1:30-4:30 on weekdays and anytime on weekends
Site you on which you found us : google

Sample RP: ((With the character you are creating, not one from a different site. At least 150 words (our minimum word post count) and two paragraphs. ))

Maxi was getting ready to go school shopping for Hogwarts with his parents, they left Lexi with a babysitter and Maxi was making sure Chester had enough food. Soon they had all climbed into the car and were on their way, maxi fell asleep in the car and woke up when they arrived. first they stopped at Gringotts to withdraw some money, then they went to Olivanders to buy a wand, he got a nine inch, oak wood wand with unicorn tail hair core.
next they went to the apothecary for potions ingrediants and a couldron, then madme malkins to be fitted for robes, then to flourish and blotts for school books. Finally they went to florean fortescues for icecream. As they ate their icecream Maxi skimmed through his school books and found many interesting spells and potions. Next they went to the magical menegerie to get a cat carrier for Chester his cat, then they went home to packhis bags for the train ride.

[Rafael Ochoa]

Points of contention:
AGE/DATE of BIRTH

ANIMAGUS

HISTORY

DISPOSABLE TIME

SAMPLE RP

[maximillion]

I don't know how else to write a sample rp but I changed the other things you mentioned.

[Rafael Ochoa]

The best way to write a sample roleplay, since there's a word per post requirement for the site, is to either wax philosophical within the character's mind, or, barring that, go extremely in depth
The sample roleplay is intended for the applicant(you) convey to the Man(me) that you can handle the word requirement. Yours was a quick and dirty summary of events transpired on the day when the Felix family went to get Maxi ready for Hogwarts. What I'm looking for is something that would happen in a much briefer instance; something that, for example, could be an introduction to a topic/thread or a response. It needs to flow a little better than a summary. Do you get my meaning?